Let the stealthy movements begin.
Mercury, Venus, Earth, Mars,
Jupiter, Saturn, Uranus, Neptune,
and sometimes Pluto.
And sometimes Y.
The new moon is
the old moon in disguise.
You can’t see me,
and sometimes I may not be
where you expect to find me in the sky.
First line, and last five lines, are pretty much perfect.
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Thanks!
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Thank you. Catching up with some of my favorite writers, glad to visit your writing space again.
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Thanks so much for checking out my new poems. I really appreciate it.
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I think I still have a few to get back to, but will get to them in the coming days.
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Wow, you have really been on a roll. Great work this month!
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